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PostSubject: Twilight's custom techs   3/21/2014, 1:02 pm

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Name: Yellow Aura
Rank: A-Rank
Element/'s: Lightning
Range: 2 inches beyond users skin
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Hare-Snake
Description: This jutsu surrounds the userís body with streaking electricity. Like the Chidori Current the brain misinterpret the lightning nature as electrical signals from the nerves, making its muscles contract. This causes the body of anyone who touches it except the user to involuntarily go stiff for 1 posts and cause major burning and possible death. Any electrical conductive materials such as water and metal can carry this same effect. A-Rank upkeep

Name: Black Aura
Rank: A
Element/'s: Black Lightning
Range: 2 inches beyond the users skin
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals:Hare-Snake-Dragon
Description: This Jutsu functions exactly like they Yellow Aura Only is meant more to be an offensive technique. The killing capabilities are increased by a lot. Unlike the Yellow Aura where instantly killing your opponent is only a possibility the Black Aura will travel through the heart stopping it instantly killing them. The jutsu will also sheer off a large chunk of flesh. The jutsu Black Lightning must be used before this can be used. A-Rank up keep.

Name: Aura Strike
Rank: B
Element/'s: Lightning or Black Lightning.
Range: 60 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Hare-Dragon
Description: This technique doesn't use up chakra to create the lightning and instead manipulates already created lightning. This technique throws the lightning created from any aura at an opponent at tier 1 speed. piercing what ever it comes in contact with assuming it isn't a defense technique of equal or greater rank while also holding the effects of the aura. The user can fire strike in rapid succession but each strike costs a B-Rank of chakra. Yellow Aura or Black Aura must have been activated to use this jutsu.

Name: Aura Current
Rank: B
Element/'s: Lightning or Black Lightning.
Range: 20 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: offensive
Hand seals: Dragon-Snake
Description: This technique throws lightning in every direction like the chidori current only it has a much greater range. The effects of the aura are carried over. Yellow Aura or Black Aura must have been activated to use this jutsu.



Name: Aura Hydra
Rank: A
Element/'s: Lightning or Black Lightning.
Range: 50 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Dragon-Hare-Snake
Description: This technique doesn't use up chakra to create the lightning and instead manipulates already created lightning. This technique creates 4 lightning hounds each hound carries the effect of the aura. Two hounds flank to the left and right of the opponent. The other two hounds go strait at the opponent but one of the two that goes straight curves up and descends from above on the opponent. Each individual hound can change it's course as the user sees fit. Each individual hound is not as strong as Aura Strike so the pierce wound won't be as big and tier 1 speed. Yellow Aura or Black Aura must have been activated to use this jutsu.

Name: Highest Heaven Lightning Annihilation
Rank: S Kinjutsu
Element/'s: Black Lightning
Range: 100 meter radius
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Boar → Monkey → Dragon → Ram
Description: The Highest Heaven Lightning Annihilation is Hiashi's most powerful long-ranged move, and, according to him, the most destructive Black Lightning technique in existence. He generates a titanic amount of the black electricity, causing it to surround his body. He then discharges it into the air, causing the atmosphere to become saturated with it. He then guides and shapes the lightning into several thunderbolts, which can be guided towards their targets. The lightning bolts are so concentrated that they have red edges, a testament to the technique's power. A single bolt has the power to completely decimate a small town. During the Datenshi War, Hiashi used it to break through Miyuki Murakami's Yata Armor. This alone is enough to demostrate the monstrous power of the technique. The user must first use black lightning in order to use this jutsu. A-Rank up keep


Name: Delayed Reaction
Rank:C-B
Range: 30 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Hand seals: Monkey-Hare
Targeted sense/'es:Sight and Feeling
Description:
All the victim has to do is see the user of the jutsu move after the hand signs are completed(trigger) to be trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu makes it appear as if the user is moving much slower than they are making them think that an attack that is going to hit them now would hit them much later. To add to the realism this genjutsu also effects touch. Any attack that hits will also appear to hit much later making it seem like everything is normal and their opponent is just slow. Effects up to two targets. Lasts 3 posts once 3 posts are up user may spend up keep of 1 rank lower chakra cost to let it last another 3 posts

The B-Ranked version is just stronger harder to break and it's range is increased to 50 meters

Name: False Clone
Rank:B
Range: 70 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Hand seals: Sank-Monkey-Rat 1 post of preperation
Targeted sense/'es:Sight and Sound
Description:
This genjutsu is placed into a clone or many clones of some sort. If any clone gets attacked by an attack that would normally disperse it or in the case of an insubstantial clone go right through it the clone instead appears to be the real user in every way and all other clones including the real person appear to disappear in what ever manner they should. Sound is also effected so that the victim or victims don't hear the dispersed clones or real person. trap lasts 8 posts genjutsu lasts 8 posts. Genjutsu is triggered when the clone is attacked and disperses.

Name: Misty Assassin
Rank: B
Range: 30 meters
Type: Offensive
Hand seals: Rat-Monkey-Hare
Targeted sense/'es: Sight and Sound
Description:
A ninjutsu genjutsu combination in which the user creates a thick mist that hinders all but the users vision by manipulating the light. The mist is real can't be dispelled by the same means as genjutsu. Should anyone be touched by the mist(trigger) then they are trapped in the genjutsu. The genjutus takes away all eyesight, sound, and smell leaving the victim trapped in an empty black void. Trap lasts 8 posts and genjutsu lasts 8 posts.

Name: Irritating Sound
Rank: B
Range: 50 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Hand seals: Monkey-Hare-Monkey-Rat
Targeted sense/'es: Feeling
Description:
After the hands sings are finished a loud whistling noise is emitted from the users mouth(trigger). Anyone who hears it can be trapped in the genjutsu(up to two people). This genjutsu numbs their entire body and takes away their ability to move. lasts 8 posts

Name: Kicking Flurry
Rank: C-Rank
Range: Close Range/Physical Contact
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description: The user unleashed kick after kick in quick succession expertly diverting the momentum from the last kick into the next making the each kick stronger and stronger. The kicks are executed in a way that removes the need to use hands for balance.

Name: Not Down Yet
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Close Range/Physical Contact
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description: Starting on the ground (lying or sitting) the user lifts their legs up doing the splits and swinging them around in a windmill using one leg to trip their opponent and most likely breaking their leg and the other for balance. The user then snaps their legs together and pushes off the ground at the same time pushing off the ground with their hands to land upright.

Name: Coral Armor
Rank:B
Range:spikes extend 4 centimeters off the armor
Type:Ninjutsu
Handsigns: Dragon-Boar
Description:This jutsu encases the use with coral acting as an armor and defending the user against everything but genjutsu and fuuinjutsu. The armor also has spikes on it impaling anyone who runs into it.
D-Rank attack doesn't effect the armor
C-Rank attack takes 5 hits to break the armor
B-Rank attack takes 2 hits to break the armor



Name: Great Puddle
Rank:B-Rank
Range:50 meters
Type:Ninjutsu
Handsigns:Snake-Hare
Description:
Creates a giant puddle on the ground 13 centimeters deep from surrounding moister in plants the air and in the ground. Naturally won't work in dry places.

Name: Coral Forrest
Rank:B
Range:30 meters
Type:Ninjutsu
Handsigns:Dragon-Snake-Monkey
Description: Covers 30 meters of ground in all direction in spiky coral with spikes 31 centimeters long. The spikes retract to allow the user of the jutsu to step through it.


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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 4:04 am

Name: Mind Alter
Rank: S-Rank
Range: 50 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: Snake-Monkey-Dragon
Description:
This genjutsu can only be used on those who are already under a genjutsu of C-Rank or higher unless the victim is willing.(Triger is if they are already in a genjutsu) This genjutsu allows the user to remove, add, or change the memories of a victim. The victim wont be aware their memories are being effected. The user can even change the personality of the victim.

The user can also learn jutsu from the victim with this genjutsu, the user does not need to pay NP for it. The user does need the proper specialties and elements. Any jutsu that can't be learned can not be learned again later unless the victim falls under this genjutsu again.

edited this

I thought it was common sense genjutsu is just illusions and doesn't actually change anything in real life, but apparently some people think it can do that.

Name: Clone Confusion
Rank: B-Rank
Range: 30 meters
Type: genjutsu
Handsigns: Snake
Description:
This genjutsu can do one of two things which is decided by the user. First option is it creates a user specified number of clones(illusions). These clones have unlimited chakra and their attacks can be felt by the victim of this genjutsu. Because the pain is caused by the genjutsu it will not aid them in breaking out. Since this is a genjutsu the clones do effect their surroundings as such they are no different from shadow clones except the user gets to chose if the clone poofs away or not from an attack.

The second option is the user hides all other clones from the victims view. Or hides the user and all but one clone from the victim. Any damage and pain done to the victim that was caused by the clones and or by the user will seem to disappear. Clone and or user attacks on the environment will also disappear. This genjutsu can only be triggered if the genjutsu False Genjutsu is broken. This genjutu lasts for 8 posts. After 8 posts the user can pay a b rank up keep to make it last another 8 posts. (can effect as many as the users specialty allows)

also you didn't re check False Genjutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 4:08 am

Might as well stick this up for you

Name: False Genjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Range: 30 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
This genjutsu causes the victim to think they are in a genjutsu and in truth they are. This genjutsu will randomly causes changes in the environment and in the sounds they hear. The exact changes can be manipulated freely by the user. It can range from tree's suddenly flickering for a bit to making them hear a specific bird whistle over and over again. This genjutsu also points these thing out to the victim so they can't miss these details making the victim feel smart they spotted the genjutsu. This genjutsu is meant to have another genjutsu layered on top of it so that when they break the genjutsu they think the next genjutsu is reality. Any genjutsu that is placed after this genjutsu won't take effect until this genjutsu is broken. Breaking this genjutsu does not break the other genjutsu that was stacked on since the victim has no idea they are under a second genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts 5 posts after 5 posts the user can pay a D-Rank up keep to keep it going for another 5 posts. The trigger is placed into the hand seals of another jutsu if the victim sees notices these hand seals they fall under this genjutsu. (Can effect as many as the users specialty allows) The user can change triggers of other genjutsu to be when this genjutsu is broken

Sleepy time was edited as well

Name: Sleepy Time
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 30 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user laces this genjutsu into the air in a 30 meter radius. The air grows heavy and feels like a dense fog against the victims skin. The victim has until a person with a sub specialty in ninjutu can preform 3 hand signs to dispel this genjutu before it takes effect after breathing it in. During this time right after the air has been sucked in the vicitim will begin to grow tired but with no other negative effects yet.(Can effect as many as the users specialty allows) Once fallen under the genjutsu the user will appear to make hand signs and use the hidden mist jutsu but with an extra hand sign. 1st post victim gets sleepy. They grow tired as if their chakra was being sucked out of them. Thinking and moving becomes a difficult chore. 2nd post victim falls asleep.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 6:20 am

Mind Alter still no. Even if you have access to other persons memories this is a no go. Take Mind Eye Reading for example, it basically sees everything in a person and does not even offer a discount. Denied.

False Genjutsu. We're gonna work on these upkeeps, most of your genjutsus go from 5-8. So please reduce that number for upkeep in every single genjutsu that isn't unapproved. Number being 3.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Temple_of_Nirvana_Technique. A rank, makes people fall asleep and has damn signs falling all around from the sky screaming:''This is a genjutsu''. On the other hand we have a C ranked that allows your contamine the air in a 30 meter radius? You know the amount of chakra required for that? I prolly forgot to mention this sooner and I'm sorry but this needs some severe rank bumping (that will allow you some powerups, yes) or significant range dropping/creating a sign. It's a C ranked technique, it's supposed to be shit.

Clone confusion. post upkeep

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 7:28 am

Mind Alter: Didn't you just say earlier that if it was just mermory altering it would be ok. Thats all it really is now.
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I can see you altering memories but there is just no way that specialty altering will be approved.

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Name: False Genjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Range: 30 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
This genjutsu causes the victim to think they are in a genjutsu and in truth they are. This genjutsu will randomly causes changes in the environment and in the sounds they hear. The exact changes can be manipulated freely by the user. It can range from tree's suddenly flickering for a bit to making them hear a specific bird whistle over and over again. This genjutsu also points these thing out to the victim so they can't miss these details making the victim feel smart they spotted the genjutsu. This genjutsu is meant to have another genjutsu layered on top of it so that when they break the genjutsu they think the next genjutsu is reality. Any genjutsu that is placed after this genjutsu won't take effect until this genjutsu is broken. Breaking this genjutsu does not break the other genjutsu that was stacked on since the victim has no idea they are under a second genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts 3 posts after 3 posts the user can pay a D-Rank up keep to keep it going for another 3 posts. The trigger is placed into the hand seals of another jutsu if the victim sees notices these hand seals they fall under this genjutsu. (Can effect as many as the users specialty allows) The user can change triggers of other genjutsu to be when this genjutsu is broken

Name: Clone Confusion
Rank: B-Rank
Range: 30 meters
Type: genjutsu
Handsigns: Snake
Description:
This genjutsu can do one of two things which is decided by the user. First option is it creates a user specified number of clones(illusions). These clones have unlimited chakra and their attacks can be felt by the victim of this genjutsu. Because the pain is caused by the genjutsu it will not aid them in breaking out. Since this is a genjutsu the clones do effect their surroundings as such they are no different from shadow clones except the user gets to chose if the clone poofs away or not from an attack.

The second option is the user hides all other clones from the victims view. Or hides the user and all but one clone from the victim. Any damage and pain done to the victim that was caused by the clones and or by the user will seem to disappear. Clone and or user attacks on the environment will also disappear. This genjutsu can only be triggered if the genjutsu False Genjutsu is broken. This genjutu lasts for 3 posts. After 3 posts the user can pay a b rank up keep to make it last another 3 posts. (can effect as many as the users specialty allows)

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 7:35 am

You say you can learn jutsus from it at the cost of 0 NP. That's a no.

False Genjutsu/Clone Confusion bai bai to the approved area.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 7:39 am

Name: Mind Alter
Rank: S-Rank
Range: 50 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: Snake-Monkey-Dragon
Description:
This genjutsu can only be used on those who are already under a genjutsu of C-Rank or higher unless the victim is willing.(Triger is if they are already in a genjutsu) This genjutsu allows the user to remove, add, or change the memories of a victim. The victim wont be aware their memories are being effected. The user can even change the personality of the victim.

The user can also learn jutsu from the victim with this genjutsu, the user still has to pay full price for the jutsu's learned. The user does need the proper specialties and elements. Any jutsu that can't be learned can not be learned again later unless the victim falls under this genjutsu again.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 7:40 am

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 6:57 pm

Name: Assisted Chakra Suppression
Rank: C-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Ram-Ox-Boar-Tiger
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as chakra suppression except for instead of suppressing their own chakra they suppress somebody else's chakra(target has to be willing) to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra. The downside of this ability is that since the targets chakra is suppressed they are unable to use sense other targets. When your chakra is suppressed, you need to unsuppressed it in order to utilize techniques that involve chakra. C-Rank upkeep

Name: Assisted Transparent Escape
Rank: B-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Horse-Monkey-Rooster-Rat-Horse
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as Transparent Escape except for instead of making themselves invisible they make someone else invisible(target has to be willing) It allows the target to spy on others without being noticed. The technique renders the user invisible during combat, allowing the target to either make stealthy strikes on their opponent or escape from the opponent's visual sight. Target must become visible in order to use jutsu. B-Rank up keep

Name: Targeting Error
Rank: B-Rank
Range: 40 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The trigger for this genjutsu is placed into the hand seals of another jutsu. If the an opponent sees these hand signs they are trapped into the genjutsu. Lasts 3 posts after 3 posts the user may pay a B-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts. (can effect as many people as the users genjutsu specialty allows.)

This genjutsu disorients the victims sense of direction as well as visual changes in order to cause the victim to attack themselves or someone else. The user of this jutsu has an illusion of themselves created while the real one is turned invisible.(in the illusion) The user can then have their illusion clone do whatever they want. The genjutsu messes with their sense of direction to attack themselves. Affected clones or summons or even real people will attack the person the user desires without them even knowing it as in the illusion they are attacking the person they had intended. Victims can't attack themselves with jutsu that they can not control after firing it off.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/21/2014, 9:21 pm

Don't forget the above techs

Name: Tai barrier
Rank: S-Rank
Range: self
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user coats their body with tons of chakra making a shield near impossible to break. 120CR to break.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/22/2014, 4:58 pm

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Name:†Assisted Chakra Suppression†
Rank:†C-Rank
Range:†the users sensory range
Type:†Sensory
Handsigns:†Ram-Ox-Boar-Tiger
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as chakra suppression except for instead of suppressing their own chakra they suppress somebody else's chakra(target has to be willing) to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra. The downside of this ability is that since the targets chakra is suppressed they are unable to use sense other targets. When your chakra is suppressed, you need to unsuppressed it in order to utilize techniques that involve chakra. C-Rank upkeep
It needs to be noted that if the person you are suppressing uses a jutsu or attacks the jutsu is dispelled.†


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Name:†Assisted Transparent Escape†
Rank:†B-Rank
Range:†the users sensory range
Type:†Sensory
Handsigns:†Horse-Monkey-Rooster-Rat-Horse
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as Transparent Escape except for instead of making themselves invisible they make someone else invisible(target has to be willing) It allows the target to spy on others without being noticed. The technique renders the user invisible during combat, allowing the target to either make stealthy strikes on their opponent or escape from the opponent's visual sight. Target must become visible in order to use jutsu. B-Rank up keep†
Same as above....


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Name:†Targeting Error
Rank:†B-Rank
Range:†40 meters
Type:†Genjutsu
Handsigns:†N/A
Description:
The trigger for this genjutsu is placed into the hand seals of another jutsu. If the an opponent sees these hand signs they are trapped into the genjutsu. Lasts 3 posts after 3 posts the user may pay a B-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts. (can effect as many people as the users genjutsu specialty allows.)

This genjutsu disorients the victims sense of direction as well as visual changes in order to cause the victim to attack themselves or someone else. The user of this jutsu has an illusion of themselves created while the real one is turned invisible.(in the illusion) The user can then have their illusion clone do whatever they want. The genjutsu messes with their sense of direction to attack themselves. Affected clones or summons or even real people will attack the person the user desires without them even knowing it as in the illusion they are attacking the person they had intended. Victims can't attack themselves with jutsu that they can not control after firing it off.
If you are going to make a Genjutsu of this nature then the handsigns need to be named and the numerical sequence in which it blends with another jutsu has to be told. Why? because if not anytime a person tries to identify the jutsu you are using via handsigns you could say you are using this tech even if it were not your true intentions in doing so. Thus the handsigns need to be listed as well as the order in which they are used.


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Name:†Tai barrier
Rank:†S-Rank
Range:†self
Type:†Taijutsu
Handsigns:†N/A
Description:
The user coats their body with tons of chakra making a shield near impossible to break. 120CR to break.
Seriously.....This seems completely chakra based. How is it Tai jutsu....How far does the coating extend from the body. How is the barrier activated? etc etc etc....this simply needs more work.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/22/2014, 5:50 pm

edits made

Name: Assisted Chakra Suppression
Rank: C-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Ram-Ox-Boar-Tiger
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as chakra suppression except for instead of suppressing their own chakra they suppress somebody else's chakra(target has to be willing) to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra. The downside of this ability is that since the targets chakra is suppressed they are unable to use sense other targets. When your chakra is suppressed, you need to unsuppressed it in order to utilize techniques that involve chakra. If the person uses an attack or jutsu this jutsu is dispelled C-Rank upkeep

Name: Assisted Transparent Escape
Rank: B-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Horse-Monkey-Rooster-Rat-Horse
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as Transparent Escape except for instead of making themselves invisible they make someone else invisible(target has to be willing) It allows the target to spy on others without being noticed. The technique renders the user invisible during combat, allowing the target to either make stealthy strikes on their opponent or escape from the opponent's visual sight. Target must become visible in order to use jutsu. If the person uses an attack or jutsu this jutsu is dispelled. B-Rank up keep

Name: Tai barrier
Rank: S-Rank
Range: self does not extend more than a centimeter from the skin
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user coats their body with tons of chakra which is invisible to the human eye(non dojutsu) making a shield near impossible to break. 120CR to break.

Its just a shield thats all it is. What is there to say. Also don't you dare tell me taijutsu doesn't use chakra. I have a million jutsu and quotes from the anime to prove otherwise.

Name: Targeting Error
Rank: B-Rank
Range: 40 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The trigger for this genjutsu is placed into the hand seals of another jutsu. If the an opponent sees these hand signs they are trapped into the genjutsu. Lasts 3 posts after 3 posts the user may pay a B-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts. (can effect as many people as the users genjutsu specialty allows.)

This genjutsu disorients the victims sense of direction as well as visual changes in order to cause the victim to attack themselves or someone else. The user of this jutsu has an illusion of themselves created while the real one is turned invisible.(in the illusion) The user can then have their illusion clone do whatever they want. The genjutsu messes with their sense of direction to attack themselves. Affected clones or summons or even real people will attack the person the user desires without them even knowing it as in the illusion they are attacking the person they had intended. Victims can't attack themselves with jutsu that they can not control after firing it off. the name of this jutsu must be stated as used at the end of a post in which it was used (in a spoiler or something)

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/22/2014, 6:03 pm

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Name: Assisted Chakra Suppression†
Rank: C-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Ram-Ox-Boar-Tiger
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as chakra suppression except for instead of suppressing their own chakra they suppress somebody else's chakra(target has to be willing) to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra. The downside of this ability is that since the targets chakra is suppressed they are unable to use sense other targets. When your chakra is suppressed, you need to unsuppressed it in order to utilize techniques that involve chakra. If the person uses an attack or jutsu this jutsu is dispelled C-Rank upkeep

Name: Assisted Transparent Escape†
Rank: B-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Horse-Monkey-Rooster-Rat-Horse
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as Transparent Escape except for instead of making themselves invisible they make someone else invisible(target has to be willing) It allows the target to spy on others without being noticed. The technique renders the user invisible during combat, allowing the target to either make stealthy strikes on their opponent or escape from the opponent's visual sight. Target must become visible in order to use jutsu. If the person uses an attack or jutsu this jutsu is dispelled. B-Rank up keep†
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Name: Tai barrier
Rank: S-Rank
Range: self does not extend more than a centimeter from the skin
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user coats their body with tons of chakra which is invisible to the human eye(non dojutsu) making a shield near impossible to break. 120CR to break.

Its just a shield thats all it is. What is there to say. Also don't you dare tell me taijutsu doesn't use chakra. I have a million jutsu and quotes from the anime to prove otherwise.
What I said is it is completely chakra based. Taijutsu uses the body to attack/defend and when using chakra it is assisting the body in some form. This barrier as so briefly described is all chakra it is not applied in making the body more efficient in any way and as it stands is a ninjutsu.


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Name: Targeting Error
Rank: B-Rank
Range: 40 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The trigger for this genjutsu is placed into the hand seals of another jutsu. If the an opponent sees these hand signs they are trapped into the genjutsu. Lasts 3 posts after 3 posts the user may pay a B-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts. (can effect as many people as the users genjutsu specialty allows.)

This genjutsu disorients the victims sense of direction as well as visual changes in order to cause the victim to attack themselves or someone else. The user of this jutsu has an illusion of themselves created while the real one is turned invisible.(in the illusion) The user can then have their illusion clone do whatever they want. The genjutsu messes with their sense of direction to attack themselves. Affected clones or summons or even real people will attack the person the user desires without them even knowing it as in the illusion they are attacking the person they had intended. Victims can't attack themselves with jutsu that they can not control after firing it off. the name of this jutsu must be stated as used at the end of a post in which it was used (in a spoiler or something)

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/22/2014, 7:53 pm

Name: Tai barrier
Rank: S-Rank
Range: self does not extend more than a centimeter from the skin
Type: Ninjutsu
Handsigns: Dragon
Description:
The user coats their body with tons of chakra which is invisible to the human eye(non dojutsu) making a shield near impossible to break. 120CR to break.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/23/2014, 4:35 am

Got another one. Don't forget the above edited jutsu

Name: Suggestive Smile
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 20 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user simply smiles. If the intended victim notices the smile they will become trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts for 3 posts after 3 posts the user may spend a C-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts.

This is a simple genjutsu that manipulates the victims feeling to be compelled to listen to what they are saying. This can range from a suggestion to an opinion or even just listen to them and not ignore them or make them want to pay extra attention to what you are saying so they donít forget, ect. This genjutsu does not actually force the victim to do anything. It just makes them want to do what the user wants them to do. The victim of course will not be aware their emotions are being played with.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/24/2014, 6:39 am

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The victim of course will not be aware their emotions are being played with.

This has to go. You can't put in jutsu description that someone can't be aware of something without even knowing anything about their experience/jutsus/abilities. Me thinks everything besides that is gud about this jutsu.

Tai Barrier that's a ninjutsu? Isn't the name a wee off?

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/24/2014, 12:55 pm

You're not approving it cuz the name seems off. lol As for the genjutsu that isn't how I meant it. I just don't want anyone metagaming out. For example that guy at LR who thought giant fire ball falling from the sky must be genjutsu. Anyways edits made.

Name: Unseen Barrier
Rank: S-Rank
Range: self does not extend more than a centimeter from the skin
Type: Ninjutsu
Handsigns: Dragon
Description:
The user coats their body with tons of chakra which is invisible to the human eye(non dojutsu) making a shield near impossible to break. 120CR to break.

Name: Suggestive Smile
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 20 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user simply smiles. If the intended victim notices the smile they will become trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts for 3 posts after 3 posts the user may spend a C-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts.

This is a simple genjutsu that manipulates the victims feeling to be compelled to listen to what they are saying. This can range from a suggestion to an opinion or even just listen to them and not ignore them or make them want to pay extra attention to what you are saying so they donít forget, ect. This genjutsu does not actually force the victim to do anything. It just makes them want to do what the user wants them to do.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/27/2014, 11:05 am

Yeah, you need more handsigns on your barrier. Head over here and read what the equivalent is (since all barrier techniques are ninjutsu) and then adjust it to something closer to that value:
http://narutouzumaki-rpg.coolbb.net/t43-ninjutsu-non-demonintial
http://narutouzumaki-rpg.coolbb.net/t41-barrier-information-and-techniques
I also want this barrier to not be reappliable until it has broken OR dismissed. It needs some downtime between the usages.

Also I want you to rewrite the end of Suggestive Smile so that it only makes the victim listen a bit more carefully/pay extra attention to what the user says instead of the current "it just makes the target do/want what the user wants" which is a VERY vague and powerful set of words.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/28/2014, 7:18 pm

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Name: Suggestive Smile
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 20 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user simply smiles. If the intended victim notices the smile they will become trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts for 3 posts after 3 posts the user may spend a C-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts.

This is a simple genjutsu that manipulates the victims feeling to be compelled to listen to what they are saying. This can range from a suggestion to an opinion or even just listen to them and not ignore them or make them want to pay extra attention to what you are saying so they donít forget, ect. This genjutsu does not actually force the victim to do anything.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/29/2014, 12:25 pm

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Name:†Beastery Mastery
Rank:†C
Range:†30 meters
Type:†Genjutsu
Handsigns:†N/A
Description:
By projecting chakra out into the air in every direction can manipulate peoples anger and rage. Twilight can force both bijuu and those with curse marks into a rage. This technique also operates the other way as well able to calm those who are raging. Those who are forced out of their rage with this tech won't benefit from it. IE if someone has 8 posts to rage and they are prematurely forced out of it. The next time they rage they will have to do it for 8 posts. The user can't use this tech on themselves since they don't have the brain for it while in a rage.

This Genjutsu needs to be bumped up a lot. The norm in genjutsu plays on the senses...when we start talking about emotions and things of that nature we go into Sharingan/Kinjutsu Genjutsu land. If you can find me a Genjutsu that shifts emotions around this rank I'll reverse my decision.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   4/29/2014, 3:06 pm

Um I abandoned that jutsu can you please look at my recently edited jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   5/1/2014, 12:30 pm

Just realized I unnecessarily added a disadvantage to one of my techs also this other tech I'm about to list has yet to be checked again.

Name: Assisted Chakra Suppression
Rank: C-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Ram-Ox-Boar-Tiger
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as chakra suppression except for instead of suppressing their own chakra they suppress somebody else's chakra(target has to be willing) to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra. The downside of this ability is that since the targets chakra is suppressed they are unable to use sense other targets. C-Rank upkeep

Name: Suggestive Smile
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 20 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user simply smiles. If the intended victim notices the smile they will become trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts for 3 posts after 3 posts the user may spend a C-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts.

This is a simple genjutsu that manipulates the victims feeling to be compelled to listen to what they are saying. This can range from a suggestion to an opinion or even just listen to them and not ignore them or make them want to pay extra attention to what you are saying so they donít forget, ect. This genjutsu does not actually force the victim to do anything.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   5/1/2014, 1:25 pm

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Name: Assisted Chakra Suppression†
Rank: C-Rank
Range: the users sensory range
Type: Sensory
Handsigns: Ram-Ox-Boar-Tiger
Description:
This technique works exactly the same as chakra suppression except for instead of suppressing their own chakra they suppress somebody else's chakra(target has to be willing) to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra. The downside of this ability is that since the targets chakra is suppressed they are unable to use sense other targets. C-Rank upkeep
Same issue I had with it last time O.O



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Name: Suggestive Smile
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 20 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: N/A
Description:
The user simply smiles. If the intended victim notices the smile they will become trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts for 3 posts after 3 posts the user may spend a C-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts.

This is a simple genjutsu that manipulates the victims feeling to be compelled to listen to what they are saying. This can range from a suggestion to an opinion or even just listen to them and not ignore them or make them want to pay extra attention to what you are saying so they donít forget, ect. This genjutsu does not actually force the victim to do anything.
The Gen is fine but it needs hand signs even if they are just generic.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   5/1/2014, 1:44 pm

right sorry the rules on sensory had me confused there I'll leave it at its approved form.

As for the gen I don't understand what you mean. This tech's trigger is like this genjutsu http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ephemeral Only instead of the pointing of a finger its a smile. I don't see why it needs hand seals.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   5/1/2014, 3:09 pm

Because on this site Ephemeral also needs hand seals in addition to the finger gesture.....trust me I asked Nike personally. Rule of thumb....if it is not Tai or Weaponry and it does not state on THIS SITE that it doesn't need hand seals then it probably does. The only exception is medical jutsu and that's on a case by case basis.

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PostSubject: Re: Twilight's custom techs   5/1/2014, 3:27 pm

Name: Suggestive Smile
Rank: C-Rank
Range: 20 meters
Type: Genjutsu
Handsigns: Snake
Description:
The user simply smiles. If the intended victim notices the smile they will become trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu lasts for 3 posts after 3 posts the user may spend a C-Rank up keep to keep it going another 3 posts.

This is a simple genjutsu that manipulates the victims feeling to be compelled to listen to what they are saying. This can range from a suggestion to an opinion or even just listen to them and not ignore them or make them want to pay extra attention to what you are saying so they donít forget, ect. This genjutsu does not actually force the victim to do anything.

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