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Raleth
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Jutsus: Lightning Surge; False Darkness; Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder; Earth Release: Earth Spear; Earth Release: Earth Style Wall; Earth Release: Earth Dragon; Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet; Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave; Earth Release: Rock Clone; Hein - Flying Swallow
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Elemental Mastery: Doton, Raiton

PostSubject: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/18/2014, 7:11 pm

Name Mirror's Edge
Rank: S
Type: Unique
Requirements: Mastery in Kenjutsu
Description: Mirror's Edge is a six-foot katana that weighs about 70 pounds. It is made of entirely of chakra metal, and the hilt is covered with a black and gold sharkskin covering. The fabric is textured and adds more grip for the user, allowing for tighter control of the blade. The front edge of the blade is polished to a mirror shine, and the back half of the blade is a dull gray. There are gold leaves ordained at the bottom of the blade. Though the size and weight of the blade is impressive, Raleth can wield the blade with one hand without losing any strength power behind it, but sacrifices exact control of his blade when he uses one hand, thus making his swing not completely accurate.
Mirro's Edge gets its name not just for the mirror-like sheen on the front edge of the blade, but for its strange ability. When the user channels an S-Rank amount of chakra into the blade it glows bright white. It then begins to float in the air and starts replicating its self five times, making six blades in total. The blades then become completely reflective and form into a pentagram around the user and his or her opponent(s). Each blade point is 5 meters away from the user and the opponent. The user's original blade then returns back to his or her hand. The user of the blade can then use these reflective blades transport to each blade at extremely high speed (tier 2 speeds to be exact). (Can only transport to one blade in each post) The blades also constantly follow the user, but only in the five meter pentagram. Each time the user moves between each blade it costs an A-rank amount of chakra. To keep the ability going it costs a b-rank upkeep.
The weakness of the ability is the range of the blades. The user can only transport withing the five pointed pentagram and keep up the high tier speed in said pentagram, and the blades are quite visible. If an s-ranked jutsu is used on one of the blades in the pentagram, the blade will shatter and the ability will be ended. This ability has a 10 post cooldown after the ability has finished.
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Using my skill points to purchase the chakra metal and the s-rank ability:
Total Skill Point: 14
Chakra Metal: -1
S-Rank Ability: -10
New Tally Skill Points: 3


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Jutsus: Lightning Surge; False Darkness; Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder; Earth Release: Earth Spear; Earth Release: Earth Style Wall; Earth Release: Earth Dragon; Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet; Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave; Earth Release: Rock Clone; Hein - Flying Swallow
Alliegance: Akatsuki
Elemental Mastery: Doton, Raiton

PostSubject: Re: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/20/2014, 3:26 am

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PostSubject: Re: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/20/2014, 4:06 am

Hello,

I'm sorry, however we don't allow teleportation. You could however try extremely fast movements between them, similar to Haku's Demonic Ice Mirrors.

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Jutsus: Lightning Surge; False Darkness; Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder; Earth Release: Earth Spear; Earth Release: Earth Style Wall; Earth Release: Earth Dragon; Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet; Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave; Earth Release: Rock Clone; Hein - Flying Swallow
Alliegance: Akatsuki
Elemental Mastery: Doton, Raiton

PostSubject: Re: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/20/2014, 2:13 pm

Raleth wrote:
The user of the blade can then use these reflective blades transport to each spot at extremely high speed (tier 2 speeds to be exact). (1 post-per teleportation).

This was what i changed it to.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/20/2014, 2:15 pm

You constantly regard teleporting in your description when it's high speed movement.

What do you mean by "1 post per teleportation?"

Can you edit or clarify what is required with the vocabulary before approval. Bump on your edits completion so I can stroll by and approve your item so you'll be good to go, sir.
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Jutsus: Lightning Surge; False Darkness; Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder; Earth Release: Earth Spear; Earth Release: Earth Style Wall; Earth Release: Earth Dragon; Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet; Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave; Earth Release: Rock Clone; Hein - Flying Swallow
Alliegance: Akatsuki
Elemental Mastery: Doton, Raiton

PostSubject: Re: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/20/2014, 2:28 pm

Raleth wrote:
(Can only transport to one blade in each post) The blades also constantly follow the user, but only in the five meter pentagram. Each time the user moves between each blade it costs an A-rank amount of chakra. To keep the ability going it costs a b-rank upkeep.
The weakness of the ability is the range of the blades. The user can only transport withing the five pointed pentagram and keep up the high tier speed in said pentagram, and the blades are quite visible.

These are the changes I made. Edit bump


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PostSubject: Re: Asura, Raleth: Equipment    2/20/2014, 2:39 pm

TY

Raleth wrote:
Name Mirror's Edge
Rank: S
Type: Unique
Requirements: Mastery in Kenjutsu
Description: Mirror's Edge is a six-foot katana that weighs about 70 pounds. It is made of entirely of chakra metal, and the hilt is covered with a black and gold sharkskin covering. The fabric is textured and adds more grip for the user, allowing for tighter control of the blade. The front edge of the blade is polished to a mirror shine, and the back half of the blade is a dull gray. There are gold leaves ordained at the bottom of the blade. Though the size and weight of the blade is impressive, Raleth can wield the blade with one hand without losing any strength power behind it, but sacrifices exact control of his blade when he uses one hand, thus making his swing not completely accurate.
Mirro's Edge gets its name not just for the mirror-like sheen on the front edge of the blade, but for its strange ability. When the user channels an S-Rank amount of chakra into the blade it glows bright white. It then begins to float in the air and starts replicating its self five times, making six blades in total. The blades then become completely reflective and form into a pentagram around the user and his or her opponent(s). Each blade point is 5 meters away from the user and the opponent. The user's original blade then returns back to his or her hand. The user of the blade can then use these reflective blades transport to each blade at extremely high speed (tier 2 speeds to be exact). (Can only transport to one blade in each post) The blades also constantly follow the user, but only in the five meter pentagram. Each time the user moves between each blade it costs an A-rank amount of chakra. To keep the ability going it costs a b-rank upkeep.
The weakness of the ability is the range of the blades. The user can only transport withing the five pointed pentagram and keep up the high tier speed in said pentagram, and the blades are quite visible. If an s-ranked jutsu is used on one of the blades in the pentagram, the blade will shatter and the ability will be ended. This ability has a 10 post cooldown after the ability has finished.
Appearance/Picture:

Using my skill points to purchase the chakra metal and the s-rank ability:
Total Skill Point: 14
Chakra Metal: -1
S-Rank Ability: -10
New Tally Skill Points: 3

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