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PostSubject: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/18/2014, 6:06 pm

Name: Kaiten Kadou-Revolving Palm Vortex
Rank: B-rank
Range: 5-10 meters
Type: Taijutsu
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Description: Kaiten Kadou improves on the eight trigrams revolving palm technique by adding the Wind element to the mix. Izanagi will gather Fuuton based Chakra in his body during his spin, thus adding to the revolving heaven technique. This will in effect, expel Chakra both raw and elemental from Izanagi himself. The Raw Chakra from the revolving heaven remains at the base of the Jutsu. The Wind element gets added on top. This in effect generates a violent vortex/tornado of razor sharp Winds around the revolving heaven technique. Izanagi is then able to repel attacks based on type and †level, defending against different kinds of attacks. The Jutsu can defend against Raiton and Suiton based techniques 1 rank higher than its own rank. Fire style jutsus of a B-rank level and lower, can make the Jutsu even more fearsome. A-rank and higher fire style Jutsus will filter through, and bypass the raw Chakra at the bass of the Jutsu. Which can potentially engulf the Hyuuga clansman utilizing the Jutsu. Izanagi is capable of expanding the vortex out to ten meters. Creating wind that can cause severe physical damage, should one get struck by the technique. The vortex reaches heights of 10 meters, designed to repel and protect, while in some cases cause damage to the enemy. The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too. Elemental Jutsus of a specific type can also affect the Jutsu.


Name: Kaiten Misairu-Revolving Heaven Missile
Rank: A-rank
Range: 50 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
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Description: Kaiten Misairu takes advantage of Izanagiís mastery over Taijutsu and his raw talent with Hyuga based Jutsus. The Hyuga clansman once again combined Fuuton with his Revolving Heaven Jutsu. This time Izanagi created a more suitable Jutsu for offensive purposes. Kaiten Misairu generates the revolving heaven technique, with a violent razor sharp winds in the form of a sphere around it. Izanagi can manipulate the technique, having the sphere span out to 15 meters in both height and width. Once again, wind is on the surface of the revolving palm, and upon Izanagiís choosing, the Hyuuga clansman will have wind combined with the technique to attack the desired enemy. The Wind rapidly shoots from the sphere at break neck speeds. The wind released in the form of missiles are four feet long and a 7 inches wide, capable of piercing through A-rank defenses, even those of the earth element. This of course makes the Jutsu most formidable, especially when releasing a barrage of missile, numbering up to 25 at any given moment. †The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too.

Name: Jūken Kyuuzou- Gentle Fist Explosion
Rank: A-Rank
Range: 15 Meters
Type: Taijutsu (Hyuuga)
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Description: Juken Kyuuzou is an improvement on the art one body blow technique. Izanagi will expel Chakra from every Tenketsu point on his body, thereby releasing a powerful blast of Chakra. The blast of Chakra when released travels a good 25 meters in all directions. The blast of Chakra is capable of blasting away opponents, causing severe damage should they be in range of the technique or get hit by it. The blast is so formidable; it is quite capable of blasting through A-rank defenses, depending on type, moving at break neck speeds as it travels. Juken Kyuuzou is one such technique that is capable of being released without warning. Through the use of the Byakugan, the Jutsu itself can be used to pinpoint the weakness of another technique. And after doing so, attack specific points of the opponent's Jutsu in order to do away with it. Despite the gentleness of the Hyuuga, the Jutsu is most brutish in its application. Allowing for both defense and offense at the same time.

Name: Jūho Shunshin- Gentle Step Body Flicker
Rank: S-rank
Range: Long Range -40 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: Ram-To Activate
Description: Juho Shunshin is heavily focused on speed, capable of propelling or moving the body from one point to another rapidly without restrictions. Izanagi will focus Chakra releasing it through his Tenketsu, especially those in his feet. The Hyuuga will appear to have vanished with speed on par with a person possessing tier 2 speed. Izanagiís movements are most gentle in the sense that there is hardly any aftermath that remains when he moves. And if anyone was capable of keeping up with him, it would be like a blur to most. The Hyuuga clansman leaves behind a dark flash or blur in his previous position. Juho Shunshin appears to be a combination of Izanagiís raw speed as a Taijutsu master, the body flicker technique and a clever use of his Tenketsu points to propel his body at these speeds. It requires a S-rank amount of Chakra to perform the technique. The Jutsu rank may be high, but thatís only because of his movements and not the difficult of the technique or any strain it may put on the body. A S-rank amount of Chakra has to be spent, every time the technique is used, which forces the Hyuuga to use it in a more conservative manner. As oppose to utilizing the Jutsu without proper care.

Name: Hakke Hakaisha-Eight Trigrams Destroyer
Rank: B-rank
Range: 15 Meters
Type: Taijutsu-Gentle Fist Style
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Description: Hakke Hakaisha uses the ideals of the gentle fist Jutsu to be able to control the enemyís Chakra network when struck. As anyone knows it is the Byakuganís abilities that help in accomplishing this feat. Izanagi on the other hand, takes two principles, combines them and as such create a new technique. The Hyuga clansman will utilize the gentle fist art, and either directly strikes an opponent. Or release a blast of concentrated Chakra from their palms, that when an opponent gets struck. The Chakra injected inside their bodies causes a violent disruption in the Chakra network. Forcing it to boiling point instantly, and as an end result both Chakra forces will collide and cause an instantaneous combustion. This combustion causes an explosion from inside the bod, attacking the Chakra network.. Izanagi has effectively taken the ideas from the C-ranked body elimination Jutsu and apply it to his gentle fist style. This combination is said to be genius in its application. The blast of concentrated Chakra is said to be three meters wide and three meters long, moving at incredible speeds. It only takes half a second for someone to get hit by this blast of Chakra from a distance. The explosion is small and contained since it happens within. As such, it doesn't conquer an area outside the body. The damage done to the opponent is however something else. Since it attacks the insides causing severe damage and in some cases death.

Weakness: The Jutsu's main weakness is the range in which one needs to be for the Jutsu to be truly effective. Since after a meter outside of its designated range, the Chakra becomes more of an harmless blast of Chakra.


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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/19/2014, 7:22 am

1. I'd suggest having Empty palm as another parent jutsu, as that's what it comes across as to me. Only a suggestion, it seems pretty okay either way
2. Seems fine to me but a suggestion of the above - Approved either way
3. I'm iffy about and will leave for someone else to look at
4. It seems okaaaaay, you mentioned the additional sacrifice of a B rank CC (if I understood that correctly) on top of the initial B rank usage? (again, unsure if I understood) could you possibly suffer from a slight penalty from using your tenketsu in a similar way to Guren's Technique which only opened 2 tenketsu
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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/19/2014, 4:12 pm

1 and 2. I know not this Empty Palm Jutsu that you speak of. Which is why I made note of the Revolving heaven only. But in any case, I do intend on purchasing all other existing Hyuuga Jutsus.

3. Better state what you're iffy about. Don't worry, I'm not gonna shout at yer lol. Just mention the things that makes it iffy and we can address it.

4. Yer. B-rank to activate, and of course upkeep as we go along. That Jutsu Guren used, doesn't cover the same principle of this Jutsu. Since she gets a momentary boost of Chakra. But penalty is with over use, it saps Chakra, and can get tiring for sure.

5. No, don't leave. Comeback!! We can talk shit over ^_^

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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/20/2014, 4:02 am

Hello, just taking a step in


  • Do each of those 25 missiles break through an A rank defense each, or much a large majority (20-25) hit to smash a defense. My reasoning is, well if its A rank, half of 25 is 12, which would be B rank, etc etc. Unless I'm wrong in assuming such

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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/20/2014, 4:11 am

Its more like an uncontrollable random spray. So would require a majority of the missiles to smash through certain things. But one missile is still harmful to the opponents body regardless.

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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/21/2014, 5:09 pm

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Name: Kaiten Kadou-Revolving Palm Vortex
Rank: B-rank
Range: 5-10 meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns:
Description: Kaiten Kadou improves on the eight trigrams revolving palm technique by adding the Wind element to the mix. Izanagi will gather Fuuton based Chakra in his body during his spin, thus adding to the revolving heaven technique. This will in effect, expel Chakra both raw and elemental from Izanagi himself. The Raw Chakra from the revolving heaven remains at the base of the Jutsu. The Wind element gets added on top. This in effect generates a violent vortex/tornado of razor sharp Winds around the revolving heaven technique. Izanagi is then able to repel attacks of an higher level, capable of defending against attacks one rank higher. Izanagi is capable of expanding the vortex out to ten meters. Creating wind that can cause severe physical damage, should one get struck by the technique. The vortex reaches heights of 10 meters, designed to repel and protect, while in some cases cause damage to the enemy. The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too.

Since this is only B-rank, I'd ask that you make it so it can only defend against techniques of B-rank or below. Seeing that wind is lightning's weakness, it can defend against lightning techniques of A-rank and below; seeing that fire is wind's weakness, it can only defend against fire techniques of C-rank and below. If a higher ranked fire technique hits the dome, then it will be engulfed in flames, which will enclose on the user inside. This is just applying Naruto logic.


Name: Kaiten Misairu-Revolving Heaven Missile
Rank: A-rank
Range: 50 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns:
Description: Kaiten Misairu takes advantage of Izanagiís mastery over Taijutsu and his raw talent with Hyuga based Jutsus. The Hyuga clansman once again combined Fuuton with his Revolving Heaven Jutsu. This time Izanagi created a more suitable Jutsu for offensive purposes. Kaiten Misairu generates the revolving heaven technique, with a violent razor sharp winds in the form of a sphere around it. Izanagi can manipulate the technique, having the sphere span out to 15 meters in both height and width. Once again, wind is on the surface of the revolving palm, and upon Izanagiís choosing, the Hyuuga clansman will have wind combined with the technique to attack the desired enemy. The Wind rapidly shoots from the sphere at break neck speeds. The wind released in the form of missiles are four feet long and a foot wide, capable of piercing through A-rank defenses, even those of the earth element. This of course makes the Jutsu most formidable, especially when releasing a barrage of missile, numbering up to 25 at any given moment. †The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too.

Can you guide the missiles with your chakra, or do they just shoot in haphazardly in different directions from the dome? I'd also ask that you nerf it down to 10 missiles per use, or if you wanted more, make it a D or C-rank chakra cost per additional missile. If you can indeed control the missiles with your chakra, you're going to have to limit the number to 10 missiles. And do the missiles just last until they hit something, or do they dissipate in the air after a few posts or so even if they haven't hit something?

Name: Jūken Kyuuzou- Gentle Fist Explosion
Rank: B-Rank
Range: 25 Meters
Type: Taijutsu (Hyuuga)
Handsigns:
Description: Juken Kyuuzou is an improvement on the art one body blow technique. Izanagi will expel Chakra from every Tenketsu point on his body, thereby releasing a powerful blast of Chakra. The blast of Chakra when released travels a good 25 meters in all directions. The blast of Chakra is capable of blasting away opponents, causing severe damage should they be in range of the technique or get hit by it. The blast is so formidable; it is quite capable of blasting through A-rank defenses, depending on type, moving at break neck speeds as it travels. Juken Kyuuzou is one such technique that is capable of being released without warning. Through the use of the Byakugan, the Jutsu itself can be used to pinpoint the weakness of another technique. And after doing so, attack specific points of the opponent's Jutsu in order to do away with it. Despite the gentleness of the Hyuuga, the Jutsu is most brutish in its application. Allowing for both defense and offense at the same time.

Yeah, I'd have to say no to a sudden 25 meter explosion with no charge time. The largest range I'd allow with no charge time would be 5, maybe 10 meters if you bump it up to A-rank. Anything more is going to need at least a one post charge, and some sign of forewarning during this charge - such as a glow or smoke emanating from the body - to give the opponent some chance to avoid. In canon, Deidara did not immediately explode in C0, he turned black and charged and stuff first. Again, this is just applying Naruto logic; a charge is not only needed to mould this great amount of chakra and prepare the explosion, but it is also only fair, as otherwise this would be an insta-hit and nobody would have any chance to dodge. Also, how does it target specific points in the opponent's jutsu? This is just a spherical explosion, how does it guide itself towards these specific points? And what if a jutsu doesn't have a weak point; what exactly do you mean by weak points? I'd just take this part out, as it's kind of vague and doesn't really add to the description of the jutsu.

Name: Jūho Shunshin- Gentle Step Body Flicker
Rank: S-rank
Range: Long Range -40 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: Ram-To Activate
Description: Juho Shunshin is heavily focused on speed, capable of propelling or moving the body from one point to another rapidly without restrictions. Izanagi will focus Chakra releasing it through his Tenketsu, especially those in his feet. The Hyuuga will appear to have vanished with speed on par with a person possessing tier 2 speed. Izanagiís movements are most gentle in the sense that there is hardly any aftermath that remains when he moves. And if anyone was capable of keeping up with him, it would be like a blur to most. The Hyuuga clansman leaves behind a dark flash or blur in his previous position. Juho Shunshin appears to be a combination of Izanagiís raw speed as a Taijutsu master, the body flicker technique and a clever use of his Tenketsu points to propel his body at these speeds. It requires a B-rank amount of Chakra to perform the technique. The Jutsu rank may be high, but thatís only because of his movements and not the difficult of the technique or any strain it may put on the body. After 2 posts of activating the Jutsu, a further B-rank amount of Chakra must be sacrificed. As such, Izanagi remains most tactical when performing this Jutsu.

For starters, obviously, I would ask that you make knowledge of body flicker a prerequisite to knowledge of this technique. And body flicker only takes a person from point A to point B in a rapid motion; this should only do the same. It cannot be a drawn out speed boost lasting more than one post - as this is a body flicker derivative - it should be a rapid speed boost lasting for only one movement. And this is going to cost an S-rank amount of chakra to perform the technique; how can an S-rank technique cost only a B-rank amount of chakra? As for the last part, where you say 'after 2 posts of activating the jutsu', again, this is just a body flicker derivative, and thus only carries you through one movement; how can it last more than one post?

Name: Hakke Hakaisha-Eight Trigrams Destroyer
Rank: B-rank
Range: 15 Meters
Type: Taijutsu-Gentle Fist Style
Handsigns:
Description: Hakke Hakaisha uses the ideals of the gentle fist Jutsu to be able to control the enemyís Chakra network when struck. As anyone knows it is the Byakuganís abilities that help in accomplishing this feat. Izanagi on the other hand, takes two principles, combines them and as such create a new technique. The Hyuga clansman will utilize the gentle fist art, and either directly strikes an opponent. Or release a blast of concentrated Chakra from their palms, that when an opponent gets struck. The Chakra injected inside their bodies causes a violent disruption in the Chakra network. Forcing it to boiling point instantly, and as an end result both Chakra forces will collide and cause an instantaneous combustion. This combustion causes an explosion from inside the body and moves outward. Izanagi has effectively taken the ideas from the C-ranked body elimination Jutsu and apply it to his gentle fist style. This combination is said to be genius in its application. The blast of concentrated Chakra is said to be three meters wide and three meters long, moving at incredible speeds. It only takes half a second for someone to get hit by this almost invisible blast of Chakra from a distance. The explosion is small and contained since it happens within. As such, it doesn't conquer an area more half a meter in distance from those struck. The damage done to the opponent is however something else. Since it attacks the insides causing severe damage and in some cases death.

Weakness: The Jutsu's main weakness is the range in which one needs to be for the Jutsu to be truly effective. Since after a meter outside of its designated range, the Chakra becomes more of an harmless blast of Chakra.


Okay, so the explosion only happens within the body? This seems fine, but seeing that this could be an instakill should it hit, I'd ask that you bump the rank up to A. Could you also specify that the explosion causes no external damage, but only occurs within the body, as it only causes the internal chakra to explode outwards? I'd ask you to lower the radius of this explosion to like 6 inches at most, as anything more covers such a large area within the body that it would most likely hit something vital no matter where it hit, thus making it completely un-survivable. And how does two different chakra signatures from two different people colliding generate a sudden explosion? This explanation is kind of vague and doesn't make much sense; by this logic, I could give myself explosion release and blow up anyone I touched. I'd just change the explanation a bit to say that you inject excess chakra so that it builds up inside of the chakra pathways and causes them to burst, damaging the network and organs around it - this is just for the sake of logic.

Sorry if I'm stepping on anyone's toes or messing anything up; Pluto just said his stuff wasn't approved yet so I jumped on it to try and get it approved quickly. Not trying to take anything out of your hands Nike, lul.
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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/22/2014, 4:33 pm

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Since this is only B-rank, I'd ask that you make it so it can only defend against techniques of B-rank or below. Seeing that wind is lightning's weakness, it can defend against lightning techniques of A-rank and below; seeing that fire is wind's weakness, it can only defend against fire techniques of C-rank and below. If a higher ranked fire technique hits the dome, then it will be engulfed in flames, which will enclose on the user inside. This is just applying Naruto logic.

Well I disagree with your logic on certain points. There is a reason I stated that raw Chakra is still at the base of the technique. So in essence, being engulfed in flames, doesn't mean it will forcefully filter through to the user. If anything, its bound to create an inferno of hot ass flames. So this could easily go either way, if you see what I mean. Anyway the edit is this.

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The Jutsu can defend against Raiton and Suiton based techniques 1 rank higher than its own rank. Fire style jutsus of a B-rank level and lower, can make the Jutsu even more fearsome. A-rank and higher fire style Jutsus will filter through, and bypass the raw Chakra at the bass of the Jutsu. Which can potentially engulf the Hyuuga clansman utilizing the Jutsu

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Can you guide the missiles with your chakra, or do they just shoot in haphazardly in different directions from the dome? I'd also ask that you nerf it down to 10 missiles per use, or if you wanted more, make it a D or C-rank chakra cost per additional missile. If you can indeed control the missiles with your chakra, you're going to have to limit the number to 10 missiles. And do the missiles just last until they hit something, or do they dissipate in the air after a few posts or so even if they haven't hit something?

To answer yer question. No, I'm not aiming, or controlling. The Jutsu simply release an uncontrollable spray once the user breaks out into a spin. Also, all of this ends once the spin ends. The missiles last as long as the post they are used on. More specifically, if they don't hit the intended target. They simply crash into whatever, cause damage to random shit, and thats it over with.

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Yeah, I'd have to say no to a sudden 25 meter explosion with no charge time. The largest range I'd allow with no charge time would be 5, maybe 10 meters if you bump it up to A-rank. Anything more is going to need at least a one post charge, and some sign of forewarning during this charge - such as a glow or smoke emanating from the body - to give the opponent some chance to avoid. In canon, Deidara did not immediately explode in C0, he turned black and charged and stuff first. Again, this is just applying Naruto logic; a charge is not only needed to mould this great amount of chakra and prepare the explosion, but it is also only fair, as otherwise this would be an insta-hit and nobody would have any chance to dodge. Also, how does it target specific points in the opponent's jutsu? This is just a spherical explosion, how does it guide itself towards these specific points? And what if a jutsu doesn't have a weak point; what exactly do you mean by weak points? I'd just take this part out, as it's kind of vague and doesn't really add to the description of the jutsu.

Erm. Have you not seen the "Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body" Jutsu? It allows an Hyuuga to expel Chakra from their body, without much warning or a charge time as you're suggesting. So please research the Jutsu. And just because the word explosion was mention in the naming of the Jutsu. Does not equate to a fiery explosion, tis simply Chakra being expelled from the body more violently, than its parent Jutsu. And if we wanna get technical with target specific weakness in a Jutsu. Go see Neji being trapped in Kisame's water prison. With the use of his Byakugan, he picked put the weak spot, and then utilized the Jutsu in order to free himself from the water prison. That's what I mean. Which is why, I specifically stated its an improvement on the parent Jutsu. In the mean time, considering the parent Jutsu is considered B-rank on the site. I have bumped up this custom to A-rank. And really, the Jutsu is being used in the same way as its parent Jutsu.

Name: Jūkenpō Ichigekishin-Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body


A technique born from their innate ability to expel chakra from every tenketsu on their body, a member of the Hyūga clan can hit their opponent with a blast of chakra that will send them flying away from the user. It was also shown that this technique can be used with pin-point accuracy to target the weak point of a technique exemplified when Neji Hyūga was trapped by Kisame Hoshigaki's Water Prison Technique, and was able to dispel it.


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For starters, obviously, I would ask that you make knowledge of body flicker a prerequisite to knowledge of this technique. And body flicker only takes a person from point A to point B in a rapid motion; this should only do the same. It cannot be a drawn out speed boost lasting more than one post - as this is a body flicker derivative - it should be a rapid speed boost lasting for only one movement. And this is going to cost an S-rank amount of chakra to perform the technique; how can an S-rank technique cost only a B-rank amount of chakra? As for the last part, where you say 'after 2 posts of activating the jutsu', again, this is just a body flicker derivative, and thus only carries you through one movement; how can it last more than one post?

I don't believe I ever stated it doesn't go from Point A to Point B. And also. I suggest you take this into consideration as well. Like I already pointed out, its an improvement on the body flicker technique, which is D-rank last time I checked. Its being bumped up another tier, logically faster than your typical body flicker. So how does one go from D-rank amount of Chakra to S-rank? There is a reason a B-rank amount is being spent every time during its use. As in, with each movement concerning the Jutsu itself. I fail to see your logic in this sense, and will actually say you're being a bit steep with Chakra taxing. Not like I'm proposing to teleport, like FTG or even on the same level as LRA, which I doubt will ask for an S-rank amount for it to be utilized.

Take into consideration the already quick movements of a Taijutsu master. Add body flicker, and other components. You get a faster body flicker in essence.


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Okay, so the explosion only happens within the body? This seems fine, but seeing that this could be an instakill should it hit, I'd ask that you bump the rank up to A. Could you also specify that the explosion causes no external damage, but only occurs within the body, as it only causes the internal chakra to explode outwards? I'd ask you to lower the radius of this explosion to like 6 inches at most, as anything more covers such a large area within the body that it would most likely hit something vital no matter where it hit, thus making it completely un-survivable. And how does two different chakra signatures from two different people colliding generate a sudden explosion? This explanation is kind of vague and doesn't make much sense; by this logic, I could give myself explosion release and blow up anyone I touched. I'd just change the explanation a bit to say that you inject excess chakra so that it builds up inside of the chakra pathways and causes them to burst, damaging the network and organs around it - this is just for the sake of logic.

The explosion concept seems to be causing some confusion and what not. Its not an explosion outside the body that destroys whatever is within range. There is a reason its called "Gentle Fist Art" as far as the Hyuuga are concerned. I simply used the word "explosion" because that's how it would seem. But the Jutsu simply messes with the insides. So its no issue removing mention of the explosion on the outside. Since it does nothing either way.
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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/22/2014, 7:16 pm

Jushiro wrote:
Name: Kaiten Kadou-Revolving Palm Vortex
Rank: B-rank
Range: 5-10 meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns:
Description: Kaiten Kadou improves on the eight trigrams revolving palm technique by adding the Wind element to the mix. Izanagi will gather Fuuton based Chakra in his body during his spin, thus adding to the revolving heaven technique. This will in effect, expel Chakra both raw and elemental from Izanagi himself. The Raw Chakra from the revolving heaven remains at the base of the Jutsu. The Wind element gets added on top. This in effect generates a violent vortex/tornado of razor sharp Winds around the revolving heaven technique. Izanagi is then able to repel attacks based on type and level, defending against different kinds of attacks. The Jutsu can defend against Raiton and Suiton based techniques 1 rank higher than its own rank. Fire style jutsus of a B-rank level and lower, can make the Jutsu even more fearsome. A-rank and higher fire style Jutsus will filter through, and bypass the raw Chakra at the bass of the Jutsu. Which can potentially engulf the Hyuuga clansman utilizing the Jutsu. Izanagi is capable of expanding the vortex out to ten meters. Creating wind that can cause severe physical damage, should one get struck by the technique. The vortex reaches heights of 10 meters, designed to repel and protect, while in some cases cause damage to the enemy. The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too. Elemental Jutsus of a specific type can also affect the Jutsu.

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Name: Kaiten Misairu-Revolving Heaven Missile
Rank: A-rank
Range: 50 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns:
Description: Kaiten Misairu takes advantage of Izanagiís mastery over Taijutsu and his raw talent with Hyuga based Jutsus. The Hyuga clansman once again combined Fuuton with his Revolving Heaven Jutsu. This time Izanagi created a more suitable Jutsu for offensive purposes. Kaiten Misairu generates the revolving heaven technique, with a violent razor sharp winds in the form of a sphere around it. Izanagi can manipulate the technique, having the sphere span out to 15 meters in both height and width. Once again, wind is on the surface of the revolving palm, and upon Izanagiís choosing, the Hyuuga clansman will have wind combined with the technique to attack the desired enemy. The Wind rapidly shoots from the sphere at break neck speeds. The wind released in the form of missiles are four feet long and a 7 inches wide, capable of piercing through A-rank defenses, even those of the earth element. This of course makes the Jutsu most formidable, especially when releasing a barrage of missile, numbering up to 25 at any given moment. †The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too.

Approved now that the nature of the missiles has been made clear.

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Erm. Have you not seen the "Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body" Jutsu? It allows an Hyuuga to expel Chakra from their body, without much warning or a charge time as you're suggesting. So please research the Jutsu. And just because the word explosion was mention in the naming of the Jutsu. Does not equate to a fiery explosion, tis simply Chakra being expelled from the body more violently, than its parent Jutsu. And if we wanna get technical with target specific weakness in a Jutsu. Go see Neji being trapped in Kisame's water prison. With the use of his Byakugan, he picked put the weak spot, and then utilized the Jutsu in order to free himself from the water prison. That's what I mean. Which is why, I specifically stated its an improvement on the parent Jutsu. In the mean time, considering the parent Jutsu is considered B-rank on the site. I have bumped up this custom to A-rank. And really, the Jutsu is being used in the same way as its parent Jutsu.

Name: Jūkenpō Ichigekishin-Gentle Fist Art One Blow Body


A technique born from their innate ability to expel chakra from every tenketsu on their body, a member of the Hyūga clan can hit their opponent with a blast of chakra that will send them flying away from the user. It was also shown that this technique can be used with pin-point accuracy to target the weak point of a technique exemplified when Neji Hyūga was trapped by Kisame Hoshigaki's Water Prison Technique, and was able to dispel it.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Gentle_Fist_Art_One_Blow_Body

I understand the nature of the parent technique; the reason why I asked for a charge time is because this is an instant 25 meter explosion, and nobody is going to be able to clear 25 meters in time to dodge this without warning, and as such it would be kind of an autohit. The parent technique is a much smaller explosion of chakra that only propels an opponent backwards. All I ask is that you either nerf the range a bit, or add a charge time.

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I don't believe I ever stated it doesn't go from Point A to Point B. And also. I suggest you take this into consideration as well. Like I already pointed out, its an improvement on the body flicker technique, which is D-rank last time I checked. Its being bumped up another tier, logically faster than your typical body flicker. So how does one go from D-rank amount of Chakra to S-rank? There is a reason a B-rank amount is being spent every time during its use. As in, with each movement concerning the Jutsu itself. I fail to see your logic in this sense, and will actually say you're being a bit steep with Chakra taxing. Not like I'm proposing to teleport, like FTG or even on the same level as LRA, which I doubt will ask for an S-rank amount for it to be utilized.

Take into consideration the already quick movements of a Taijutsu master. Add body flicker, and other components. You get a faster body flicker in essence.

As I'm sure you know, S-rank techniques are required to boost you to tier 2 speed, and thus this must be S-rank like it is. S-rank techniques are S-rank techniques because of their power, and by definition they take an S-rank amount of chakra to activate. You cannot bypass the chakra cost of an S-rank jutsu; this needs to cost an S-rank amount of chakra. Also, what I was saying was that if this is a derivative of body flicker, then it is not a drawn out speed boost, but rather it only lasts for a single movement to get you from one place to another. In body flicker you cannot attack someone or do anything else while you are moving - it is just a quick burst of speed. If this is based off body flicker, it is not going to last multiple posts and boost your speed for extended periods of times, it is going to be an extremely large speed boost for one movement to do nothing but move. That's all.

Jushiro wrote:
The explosion concept seems to be causing some confusion and what not. Its not an explosion outside the body that destroys whatever is within range. There is a reason its called "Gentle Fist Art" as far as the Hyuuga are concerned. I simply used the word "explosion" because that's how it would seem. But the Jutsu simply messes with the insides. So its no issue removing mention of the explosion on the outside. Since it does nothing either way.

That's not the point. The kind of explosion does not matter - it is still important to state that the explosion does not cause external damage, and is injected only into the inside of the body. This is an area where confusion can potentially arise. And I'm still going to ask that you lower the radius of the internal explosions to 6 inches for the reasons stated in my previous post.

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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/23/2014, 5:03 am

1. Range lowered on 3rd technique.

2. Did you read any of the edits I did on the Shunshin jutsu? We already agreed it carries someone from point A to point B. Its like repeating the same thing again. And its exactly for the reason of it not being a constant thing, which is why I disagree with your Chakra cost. I dont agree with your logic but whatever. Im starting to lose interest in this now. Again, make sure to read the edits.

3rd. Final jutsu. I've already removed the stuff regarding what happens on the outside of the body. And what difference does 6 inches inside the body makes to the Chakra network? The jutsu is attacking the Chakra network. Again, no need to make a deal out of the word explosion. One could still use the works disruption and or even shut down and still achieve the same. So whats 6 inches to the Chakra network?


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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/23/2014, 5:33 am

Hello, I'm going to interject

I see a little confusion going on, and going to address it before some jimmies get rustled.


  • If techniques deal with speed, especially tier 2. I can't in good faith allow even a nano-second of tier 2 speeds at a lower cost because its such a "short" amount of time. I set them as that rank, specifically because of this. Moving a Tier 2 speeds (Like 5th gate speed) without drawbacks, at a B rank, isn't going to cut it. Your basically asking us to let you move at 5th gate speeds, at a lower rate, without harming your body... because its an enhanced body flicker. Part of the reason 5th gate is dangerous to your body is because of the extreme forces acting on it. I clearly stated that to move at tier 2 speeds, you'd be required to pay S rank worth of chakra. To avoid such situations like this that are known to arise. Very sorry for any misunderstanding's that occur.

  • I've read some of your techniques, and I'm not a huge fan of the "almost invisible" chakra styling, which even as I understand it, most of the Hyuuga's Gentle fist and derived techniques have a clear visible hue/clue to them. Over all the techniques are a little on the "strong" side, but seem workable, its just the "almost invisible" aspect I'm not a fan of.



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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/23/2014, 5:35 am

Again ive done the necessary edits. And this is still a drawn out saga...why?

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PostSubject: Re: Izanagi no Jutsu   2/23/2014, 5:22 pm

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Name: Kaiten Kadou-Revolving Palm Vortex
Rank: B-rank
Range: 5-10 meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns:
Description: Kaiten Kadou improves on the eight trigrams revolving palm technique by adding the Wind element to the mix. Izanagi will gather Fuuton based Chakra in his body during his spin, thus adding to the revolving heaven technique. This will in effect, expel Chakra both raw and elemental from Izanagi himself. The Raw Chakra from the revolving heaven remains at the base of the Jutsu. The Wind element gets added on top. This in effect generates a violent vortex/tornado of razor sharp Winds around the revolving heaven technique. Izanagi is then able to repel attacks based on type and †level, defending against different kinds of attacks. The Jutsu can defend against Raiton and Suiton based techniques 1 rank higher than its own rank. Fire style jutsus of a B-rank level and lower, can make the Jutsu even more fearsome. A-rank and higher fire style Jutsus will filter through, and bypass the raw Chakra at the bass of the Jutsu. Which can potentially engulf the Hyuuga clansman utilizing the Jutsu. Izanagi is capable of expanding the vortex out to ten meters. Creating wind that can cause severe physical damage, should one get struck by the technique. The vortex reaches heights of 10 meters, designed to repel and protect, while in some cases cause damage to the enemy. The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too. Elemental Jutsus of a specific type can also affect the Jutsu.


Name: Kaiten Misairu-Revolving Heaven Missile
Rank: A-rank
Range: 50 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns:
Description: Kaiten Misairu takes advantage of Izanagiís mastery over Taijutsu and his raw talent with Hyuga based Jutsus. The Hyuga clansman once again combined Fuuton with his Revolving Heaven Jutsu. This time Izanagi created a more suitable Jutsu for offensive purposes. Kaiten Misairu generates the revolving heaven technique, with a violent razor sharp winds in the form of a sphere around it. Izanagi can manipulate the technique, having the sphere span out to 15 meters in both height and width. Once again, wind is on the surface of the revolving palm, and upon Izanagiís choosing, the Hyuuga clansman will have wind combined with the technique to attack the desired enemy. The Wind rapidly shoots from the sphere at break neck speeds. The wind released in the form of missiles are four feet long and a 7 inches wide, capable of piercing through A-rank defenses, even those of the earth element. This of course makes the Jutsu most formidable, especially when releasing a barrage of missile, numbering up to 25 at any given moment. †The partner Jutsu (Revolving Palm Heaven) is required for this Jutsu. Means the user must first learn the parent Jutsu. †

Weakness: The Jutsu is best defeated via prevention more than anything. Stopping the Hyuuga from breaking out into a spin. Also Chakra absorption techniques of the appropriate level can have an effect too.

Name: Jūken Kyuuzou- Gentle Fist Explosion
Rank: A-Rank
Range: 15 Meters
Type: Taijutsu (Hyuuga)
Handsigns:
Description: Juken Kyuuzou is an improvement on the art one body blow technique. Izanagi will expel Chakra from every Tenketsu point on his body, thereby releasing a powerful blast of Chakra. The blast of Chakra when released travels a good 25 meters in all directions. The blast of Chakra is capable of blasting away opponents, causing severe damage should they be in range of the technique or get hit by it. The blast is so formidable; it is quite capable of blasting through A-rank defenses, depending on type, moving at break neck speeds as it travels. Juken Kyuuzou is one such technique that is capable of being released without warning. Through the use of the Byakugan, the Jutsu itself can be used to pinpoint the weakness of another technique. And after doing so, attack specific points of the opponent's Jutsu in order to do away with it. Despite the gentleness of the Hyuuga, the Jutsu is most brutish in its application. Allowing for both defense and offense at the same time.

Name: Jūho Shunshin- Gentle Step Body Flicker
Rank: S-rank
Range: Long Range -40 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Handsigns: Ram-To Activate
Description: Juho Shunshin is heavily focused on speed, capable of propelling or moving the body from one point to another rapidly without restrictions. Izanagi will focus Chakra releasing it through his Tenketsu, especially those in his feet. The Hyuuga will appear to have vanished with speed on par with a person possessing tier 2 speed. Izanagiís movements are most gentle in the sense that there is hardly any aftermath that remains when he moves. And if anyone was capable of keeping up with him, it would be like a blur to most. The Hyuuga clansman leaves behind a dark flash or blur in his previous position. Juho Shunshin appears to be a combination of Izanagiís raw speed as a Taijutsu master, the body flicker technique and a clever use of his Tenketsu points to propel his body at these speeds. It requires a S-rank amount of Chakra to perform the technique. The Jutsu rank may be high, but thatís only because of his movements and not the difficult of the technique or any strain it may put on the body. A S-rank amount of Chakra has to be spent, every time the technique is used, which forces the Hyuuga to use it in a more conservative manner. As oppose to utilizing the Jutsu without proper care.

Name: Hakke Hakaisha-Eight Trigrams Destroyer
Rank: B-rank
Range: 15 Meters
Type: Taijutsu-Gentle Fist Style
Handsigns:
Description: Hakke Hakaisha uses the ideals of the gentle fist Jutsu to be able to control the enemyís Chakra network when struck. As anyone knows it is the Byakuganís abilities that help in accomplishing this feat. Izanagi on the other hand, takes two principles, combines them and as such create a new technique. The Hyuga clansman will utilize the gentle fist art, and either directly strikes an opponent. Or release a blast of concentrated Chakra from their palms, that when an opponent gets struck. The Chakra injected inside their bodies causes a violent disruption in the Chakra network. Forcing it to boiling point instantly, and as an end result both Chakra forces will collide and cause an instantaneous combustion. This combustion causes an explosion from inside the bod, attacking the Chakra network.. Izanagi has effectively taken the ideas from the C-ranked body elimination Jutsu and apply it to his gentle fist style. This combination is said to be genius in its application. The blast of concentrated Chakra is said to be three meters wide and three meters long, moving at incredible speeds. It only takes half a second for someone to get hit by this blast of Chakra from a distance. The explosion is small and contained since it happens within. As such, it doesn't conquer an area outside the body. The damage done to the opponent is however something else. Since it attacks the insides causing severe damage and in some cases death.

Weakness: The Jutsu's main weakness is the range in which one needs to be for the Jutsu to be truly effective. Since after a meter outside of its designated range, the Chakra becomes more of an harmless blast of Chakra.

The edits made are enough to satisfy me. All approved unless someone else sees something.

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