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PostSubject: Shu v Twili   4/29/2014, 8:26 pm

~The Passing String~

An area, grass high as the shoulders of barrel chested men. The sight of the moon such a glimmer. The silhouette of a man. A Ronin. An armor-less samurai turned shinobi stands basking in the nice few.

ShuuuuuuuuuSHHUUUUIIIIIISHUUU

The sounds of the winds breath hit the grass plains. Once a peaceful sound thus turned into sounds of violent gusts. Once hidden, a man stood Afro blown by the wind. Flowing. The sea of curls and kinks did so like a ribbon in the wind. The sounds of a strange guitar strummed on the wind now. Yes, a sort of music.  

ShuuuuuuuuuSHHUUUUIIIIIISHUUUShuuIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIShu...

This time, from the pattern of grass wavering in the wind the man of the curly air turned his head. What could be seen was a shinobi headband. The back tassels far behind the man's head, like the shadows of passing birds. The sound of vicious chirping ensued. A metallic sound....

Cha-Chich...

The man's hand now upon a blade upon his hip. A stare grew. The silhouette opens it's eyes, a piercing white. Tense and rather ominous. The wind blew once more, the final time as the man brandished a katana that sounded as if it cut the brush and the wind at the same time.

Cha-Chich...SHHHHHHHHSSHCHA!

Wa-Waft.....Wa-Wa.....WAFT WAFT WAFT.

ShuuuuuuuuuSHHUUUUIIIIIISHUUUShuuIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIShu...

First the metallic sounds, then the winds and brush began to simultaneously become disturbed. Then a sound of threshing hit. The winds and grass stopped. A clear view on the Shinobi, a chocolate skinned one. A complexion quite expressive though aged. His broad shoulders and lean body type showed a rather striking silhouette. Not only that but his eyes, strong and unwavering looked upon a world of shear darkness. He put his sword inbetween his hands quite swiftly. A clapping sound ensued. A booming voice that was smooth yet intimidating came from the manly figure. The word that came out was....

BYAKUGAN!

A pulse of pure raw energy hit. The guitar now began to match with a symphony. Drums hitting rhythmically and flutes mimicking the once rampant winds.  The loud sounds and beauty came with it. It seems as though as soon as the symphonic and quite rhythmic theme came into play, a glint from the moon shot down. Pure darkness-piercing light. The shade soon had a more lightened tone. His arsenal can be seen. On his right, the katana and it's scabbard. On his left, a rather regal looking bow. And finally on his back, a scroll that is rather large. Of those used by sages. The contents are presumed to be weapons of some sort. As the man smirked his voice came back. Once booming now more controlled and stern. The music picked up.

"Well....those who sneak upon the shadows will be frightened of their contents.    

The man wove handseals at a rate as if you can tell he is a specialist or at least quite adept in the arts. Ram->Boar was the sequence. A slight "Tooom" sound could be heard once the Boar seal hit. Thus chakra began to well up around his sword and hands. The sounds of fast electrical interference. The heat that crept upon the area by surprise. Raiton chakra, commonly used by shinobi of Kumogakure and of those who use any sort of sword. Yes, this was a true ronin.

~The Drums Ensue~

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BYAKUGAN MODE ENGAGED 1/3 ON THE UPKEEP

WC:559 Words.

How I Want This Interpreted.

As said on Revy's post, there is a HUGE error on my part though it wasn't implied. The error being the tinge that makes it seem as though I saw her before she came into the range. In this case I didn't. The WHOLE part before the activation of the Byakugan was me explaining the area and setting the mood. Now, I understand why the post had some concern but I honestly can't go on with this tiny misconception on the viewer's part done because of my cryptic post.

The Whole Activation of the Byakugan was to set a tone, suspicion. Due to Shumasa's role as a shinobi, it has left him vigilant. Some my call this Paranoid. As such he did Activate the Byakugan as to increase his perception. So he wouldn't be caught off guard. The words he speaks come off as actually quite sad, at least as I wanted it to be. Shu's body is young but he is facing a sense of paranoia. As such he can sometimes become rather combative and assertive in situations that are rather...ominous. This was the tone I wanted to set. Plus with the music I wanted a song sort of like those from the Okami Soundtrack or from the Wu-Tang Clan's Rza in "Afro Samurai". This again was used to set mood and give the reader some candy. Sorry that the flavor confused you. Hopefully we can finish this all the way and make this a clean fight.

Sincerely,
Shumasa Hyuga, 5/4/14 2:29am.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   4/29/2014, 11:39 pm

Twilight was hunting herself a ninja. Nothing personal about it was simply a mission and Twilight would carry it out like the mindless zombie the village wanted her to be. Not even in the dead of night with only the faintest of light would her mission be hindered. At the very least the area was comfortable. It had the same high amount moister in the air as Taki which meant there was lots of water in the area for Twilight to play with. Twilight thankfully had a friend who could help her see. Performing a single hand sign and slamming her hand on the ground Paulie her trusty Merlin friend was summoned. He hoped onto Twilight's left shoulder. The two had a unique connection. They could see the world through from the others perspective which was more of an advantage for Twilight than it was for Paulie.

As the two traveled along looking for their prey they noticed a chakra signature 100 meters out. It was a rather large chakra signature at that. Twilight went to investigate just in case this happened to be their target. As Twilight walked through the tall grass which extended much higher than the top of her head. If it wasn't for her trusty feathered friend she would walking utterly blind. Once Twilight went within 50 meters of Shumasa he would be able to see her with his byakugan. Twilight would continue until she was 30 meters from the man. From there Twilight had Paulie check it out. Pauile flew 20 meters into the air and from his birds eye veiw he could see the man who was illuminated by the moons light. It was confirmed this was indeed Twilight's target.

The next events happened very quickly. Paulie began flying back to Twilight to go land on her shoulder again while at the same time Twilight began forming hand signs in a blur of speed. Twilight's body then lit up with deadly black lightning dancing all over her body. Then Twilight formed more hand signs and the ground all around Twilight began flooding with water about 5 inches for 50 meters in all directions. The lightning would be conducted through the water Twilight was now standing on. If Shumasa was still standing on the water or touching the water then the black lightning would rip apart his feet as well as travel through his body and destroy his heart.

All the hand signs used for all this jutsu had a special property installed. If Shumasa saw any one of the handsigns being preformed then he would fall under the genjutsu and since he was using the all seeing byakugan it would be impossible to miss. If he fell into the genjutsu then the real Twilight would be replaced by a clone of Twilight. This new Twilight would walk 10 meters to Twilights left but still 30 meters from Shumasa. However Twilight didn't know her opponent was using the byakugan. That meant while Twilight appeared to be in one place her chakra would really be in another, revealing the illusion.

Right after Twilight finished her hand signs to create the water puddle she pulled out two shuriken each had pre attached 50 meters of wire and 2 bomb tags, Twilight threw the shuriken straight up into the air and then used the wire to direct the path of the shuriken so that they would fall on top of Shumasa. Once they the shuriken were 3 meters from him she would preform a single hand sign and detonate all 4 bomb tags. If he fell under her genjutsu though he wouldn't even see the shuriken coming as it didn't have chakra for his byakugan to see and the genjutsu prevented him from seeing it by normal means.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   4/30/2014, 5:02 pm

~Hm no Jutsu~
   The young petite female had an unnatural amount of chakra. Her reserves quite high, thus causing suspicion from the Hyuuga Mind. His sharp eyes near instantly picked up on the hand seals and moved at the same time. It was  rather easy to track though her speed was to be said as "masterful". He then noticed a sense of dry heat then moisture at the same time. Suiton and Raiton? The combo that can be QUITE deadly?

   Strange that Shu picked up on it as his katana made sounds of chirping birds. He took a leap into the air at a 45 degree angle from a standing position. The jump was 20 meters. Thus making Shumasa away from the water. A jump backwards meant for a successful dodge since he was a weapon and taijutsu user. Meaning his physical training is top of the marks, at least from his observation. As the man jumped he wove the Dragon->Hare->Boar->Ram sequence.  As he did this the Raiton in his Sword grew and surged. He slashed with his sword as a ball of pure raiton barreled down the way. The ball then revved up and condensed. This made the ball MUCH more lethal. An impact from this could surely knock the petite girl off of her feet. From here, the man sighed as he saw the WHOLE trick. She had tried to use genjutsu to use his eyes against him but he instead saw the signs and felt the heat. Making it obvious to move away. He saw the kunai get tugged and fall before exploding. A slight chuckle as he put his sword in it's holder. He then grabbed the scroll on his back. This scroll was rather special since it was armed to the teeth.

He leapt again 20 meters into the air at a 70 degree angle. Giving him a  GREAT view of the battle field. As he opened the scroll, 15 shuriken, 15 kunai, and 75 senbon shot down at rapid succession. Due to the man's immense speed the girl should be taken aback if this was to go as planned. He smirked again as he performed the Dog → Rabbit → Monkey → Clap Hands sequence. This made 2 of the kunai from the fifteen turn to 20. 10 on each kunai. This made the ninja tools into a hail storm though not in a straight line. No, they came out like a sort of pulse. The senbon shot at assorted areas in the middle layer, the Kunai shot hard down in the center layer, and the shuriken glided and sliced on the outer layer coming at a 45 degree angle. Making the Ninja tools form like a sort of ring. If she moved and got hit by senbon, she would indeed be pierced due to the weapon's nature. If she stayed in the center she would be bombarded by kunai that would most likely kill her on the 6-7 kunai and since there was 35 kunai, this meant that this attack did over that amount by 5 times. Over kill. And if she were to try to run outside the circle, she would have to be NIMBLE as the Shuriken came at an angle that would close in. Thus making her time frame quite small.

From the angle he should land at the other side of her. Looking straight back at her. His smirk came as he took a stance. The Ninja tools came in quite fast though not before this attack, a fail safe. He was going to shoot at her STRAIGHT down. She would need to keep solid momentum to even have a chance at getting away, the speed by running in fluid motion. As such the Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm to do the job. Since this wasn't ninjutsu NOR was it a well known jutsu by many this would be hard to read. The man simply thrust an open palm at the girl. As soon as the thrust happened a huge wave of force came towards the female at a great speed. This attack can shut down her tenketsu in her body, making her MUCH weaker. This attack most likely would knock the girl off her feet and cause her to roll. Severe internal damage will be caused. The great thing about this attack is the ability it gives, the surprise factor. This attack was of invisible force and thus would be HARD to trace. If she had any chance, she would astound the Hyuuga. His Byakugan intensifying as he spoke in a low tone.

"Seems as though she has some sort of...unnatural power. I must shut her down before she does me in!

He wrapped up his scroll in no time flat. Not even ALL of his arsenal was used. As he smirked he brandished his sword. The raiton coming on in a spark. He got into a stance with his sword with a mix of the gentle fist style though an improvised idea. He was going to use his Hyuuga skills and agility with his blade and as such, become lethal. He smirked as he saw the whole monstrosity of an attack unfold. To him, it was a beautiful work of art.

~Hm.....~


WC:860
Chakra: 395-5(d)=390-20(b)=370-3(d-rank upkeep)=367

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I edited this as to help with Twili's post AND to fix any continuity errors in this fight. Sorry for the inconvenience.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   4/30/2014, 5:46 pm

[Calling hits details can be found at the end of the post.]

Twilight watched as the man jumped backed 5 meters. Mid jump he preformed some hand signs and cast a ball of lighting at her. Since he was about 32.5 meters away and she could sense the lighting chakra being hurled at her she had tons of time simply move out of the way of the small lightning ball. Her target then landed on the electrified water ripping away at his feet and traveling though his body into his heart killing him. It seemed as if when he landed he planned on jumping again though this wasn't the only thing that would kill him. Her shuriken would fall on top of him moving out of the way by only a few meters wouldn't work she could still make adjustments to change the shuriken's path. Not to mention escaping the explosion was impossible since each bomb tag had an explosion distance of 10 meters and since there were 4 tags this made for one very large explosion. Her mission was a success there was no way he could have survived the combination of deadly lighting and giant explosions.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   4/30/2014, 6:49 pm

Twili, I win dude. You even checked my updates wrong. I have Tai.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   4/30/2014, 7:29 pm

Ok I'll be the judge of this fight since no one else will. First off:

1. Shuamas post starts off already aware of the presence who hadn't even entered the topic. You cant do that because that's restricting what the enemy is capable of doing in their very first post, or it is completely voided by them not meeting the requirements for you to notice them to begin with.

So following that, everything from Shumasa's notice of a figure and beyond is voided. Why? because the notice was of nothing but the presence of Twilight before she had even got close enough to notice. Shumasas second post only proves that. HOWEVER because Twilight met the conditions of Shumasa's first post by entering his field of vision, everything in his post is re-validated.

This is easily problematic though, you really shouldn't do this to begin with Shumasa.

2. An attack was never made in the first post, all Shumasa did was charge his weapon with his Jutsu. Just thought I'd clear that up. This alone 'would' be voided as well because it came after his notice of being snuck up on. Anything else and it'd be matagaming. But of course Twilight validated it herself. But, moving on.

3. Twilights first post, her casting the Genjutsu is borderline metagaming. (And why the fuck does she have a Genjutsu that is cast through her hand seals? Talk about every Ninjutsu users bane wtf. That's just my opinion though I'm just ) Twilight detected Shumasa through sensory, as described, so the Genjutsu is simply taking advantage of the fact that you do not know that Shumasa has Byakugan, and is currently using it. There is a thicket of grass that reaches OVER Twilights head between her and Shumasa, that alone furthers this point. Moving on.

4. First part of Shu's reply. He noticed the hand seals, thus the Genjutsu would have landed. This was his fault for seeing the hand seals, but ignoring the genjutsu cast, even if that genjutsu is retarded and shouldn't have even been approved. So yes, he WOULD be under the Genjutsu had things gone the way they should be, ignoring all previous problems. But moving on from there;

5. Shu's never stated exactly what it was he reacted to. Whether or not he saw the shuriken, he dodged them without a real reason. Now thats not exactly metagaming, because Twilight DID cast a water technique that caused water from beneath her flood out all over the place. Water isn't silent, and it sure as hell isn't invisible, so the moment he even hears the sound of rushing water headed towards him, or even see it, that is a valid excuse to jump away from it. Since the water attack was made BEFORE the shuriken attack, which it WAS because it would take time for the real twilight to create distance from the clone, he thus dodged the shuriken as well, even if he shouldn't have been able to see them.

6: The attack Shumana launched WHILE dodging the first time, hit the ground. It's Lightning, so what happens? Twilight is standing on the water, in contact with it, so the lightning would electrocute that water and travel through with the ball of lightning that headed in her direction, electrocuting her only faster. So if she had failed to break her contact with the water, that attack would indeed land, traveling through the own water she created.

7: When Shumasa had jumped to dodge the water however, he did NOT explain how far back he jumped. Because of that lack of detail, who knows where he's at now? He could have jumped to the other side of the world for all we know, or he could have jumped only so far and have still landed in Twilight's water. The thing is however, if he did, both of their lightning attacks would land at roughly the same time. They would electrocute each other. And most likely Twilight is knocked out, dead, or just electrocuted. Cause idk wtf his attack even is or does.

8: Twilights Black Aura attack ONLY reaches 2 inches beyond her skin, so no way in hell would it remain at full power while traveling the entire distance her water technique reaches, being the full 50 meters. Shumasa was already at a 30 meter distance to begin with, so assuming he even moved 1 inch back, the lightning Twilight used would be so dulled and stretched thin, at most it would just shock him.
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Everything else from there on out doesn't matter due to the lack of detail given before those points happened. The battle would end right there, each of you hit with each others attacks, neither of them ensuring a kill at all. There is so much missing detail on both of your sides it is absolutely ridiculous.

So what does this mean?

Route 1;

You both are hit, Idk what Shumasus attack does, but Shumasu is NOT dead. Twilight probably isn't dead either, maybe badly electrocuted at most, and maybe knocked out. Who knows, there is no detail surrounding what Shumasa's attack will do. And everything following takes it's ordinary pace.

Route 2;

OR if you feel like ignoring all of the really bad mistakes in this topic, Shumasa's first jump covered more than a 20 meters distance, meaning he successfully avoided any attack Twilight made, and was out of range of her water. From there, his post picks up and the fight continues. However, Twilight is still going to be electrocuted by the ball of lightning, because she herself allowed the ball of lightning to pass right by her, yet it's on the very water that she's standing on.

So what does Shumasa's attack do? Who knows, there's a serious lack of detail. You guys can decide that if you choose this route to go. BOth routes only fork for a very small section however, which is simply determining whether or not Shumasa was hit with anything. Even if he was hit, as explained in point #8.

Pretty sure that's all. have fun.

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Since I finally figured out what the jutsu was that Shumasa used with the lightning ball;

[19:51:12] Shumasa : Name: Chidori Swoop Rank:C Range: Short-Medium Type: Ninjutsu Handsigns: Dragon-> Hare-> Boar-> Ram. Description: A projectile style in the Chidori set. It is much weaker due to the contact of the physical Chidori not being added. This wave is shaped as a ball around the size of a single meter. The ball can be condensed to 1/2 feet by using 5cr. The attack can hit in different ways. If condensed it can cause singes, nerve damage that can be repaired in time, and can cause slight internal bleeding. If not condensed the ball will splash on contact of any surface. Making the ball's meter size cover 2. The damage if hit directly is equal to C-ranked Raiton damage with a slight stun effect lasting a single post. If hit from the splash the damage is D-rank but with a reminder post stun. (Aka a slowed reaction time. The should be quite numb from it though being able to move, just uncoordinated.)

Any point where Twilight is hit with this attack, she is not hit with it's full power and simply by a splash of it through the water. This would mean she's simply hit with a somewhat strong shock, and a 'reminder post stun', as explained in the jutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   5/3/2014, 8:49 pm

[OOC:I tired to work with you but you refused saying "Twilight just take the loss"

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   5/3/2014, 8:54 pm

[OOC: The problem has been solved by Revy. No need to even post here no more. Lol want to continue and re-write your post or...]

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   5/4/2014, 2:32 am

{OOC: I have indeed fixed the continuity. It went from 2 point of views. (Duh). Shu's view was a few moments after Twili got on the field. (I honestly don't know why she did that much trying to find herself in the dark. It could have been done much smoother.) From there Twili moved, I dodged. I attacked and now Twili has to react. Sorry for any inconvenience.

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PostSubject: Re: Shu v Twili   5/6/2014, 10:59 pm

She left. So I call wins

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